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Post by Guest Mon Jun 21, 2021 3:28 am


KREECHER KREECHER TWW0u4j

General


Alias/Nicknames: Kreech, Kree
Race: Eldritch
Sub-species: Demon (Envy/Glutton)
Gender / Sexuality: Genderless / Pansexual
Age: Unknown but Ancient
Alignment: Rogue
Faction: Factionless

Persona


Personality: Kreech is odd, like literally if you look up the definition of the word "Odd" their image is probably found there, loving to learn and mimic new sounds and play with his food… They are also chaotic evil at best and a monstrosity at worst, finding delight only in causing fear and pain in the lives of mortals. Their main goal in life is to hunt, eat, and collect voices and sounds to make the first two things easier. Their secondary goal; become as powerful as the beasts of lore and relish in the terror of mankind wrought by their own hands, they don’t wish to be a secondary tale or a side thought, they want the full power their kind can master. To say they are a jealous beast, would be putting them mildly, but would otherwise be correct; they will do anything to achieve their goals and reach the top of the pedestal of their kind. While usually have little desire to cooperate with others the demon can be… bargained with. Kreech loves all things shiny or considered precious, they can also be seen striking up contracts with those willing to give them new voices or sounds to mimic, those none of their contracts come with simple terms and they are known for being a fickle creature. They're not noted for their general intelligence, though they are clever and will out wit most things they hunt fairly easily, socially they are about as smart as a brick of cement. Humor and sarcasm are lost on this creature, they simply do not understand it, what laughter they can manage is merely a learned mocking behavior. They do seem to be able to express some emotion but no one is certain if they actually feel them or if it is just a mockery they've learned over the span of their existence, it is also possible that these few emotions are their last tidbit connection to the mortal life they once existed as.

History: No one really knows exactly where Kreecher began, not even Kreecher, and stories of Kreecher’s kind span across generations and landscapes, from mountain villages to the larger cities and all the cracks and crevices in between; it seems as though across time and across the world every race, every class, has heard tales of these monstrosities and they often used as fables and tales to keep naughty children in line. Kreech is an Eldritch, a Demon, spawned from the falling of a mortal man to his own sins and desires, since spawning they have forgotten who they once were and have done nothing but cause terror and bloodshed in their wake since. Kreech themselves has taken to traveling, getting a taste for his newfound thrill in the hunt of mankind and the chaos spread by their own hand.

As a human, though Kreech no longer remembers this life time, he was a envious and gluttonous man, who fell prey to his desires and sold his soul to a demon to get what he wanted. When his contract went astray and unraveled around him ruining his chances to receive what he desired, the demon came to retrieve what was owed per the terms of the contract and the man killed him in a last ditch effort to try and retain his soul but it was to late, and thus Kreech was born from the desperation of the corrupt soul of a mortal man who killed a demon…

Likes: Shiny Things, Lanterns, Collecting New Sounds/Voices.

Dislikes: Sunlight, Gun Fire, Water.

Goal/Aspiration: The destruction of humanity, or anything else that gets in their way.

Key Fear/Adversary: The sun, it is the one thing that will drive them off.

Appearance


Height: 10 ft
Body Type: Slim
Hair: None unless you count the tendrils of shadow like energy that whisp off him.
Eyes: Red and lots of them..
Skin Tone: They don't really have skin, they seem to be made of a thick semi viscous substance; shiny and black, held in a cage within whatever outer shell they are currently using.

Overall Appearance:
Kreecher:
KREECHER IpA2g7s


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Post by Iris Wed Jun 23, 2021 5:42 am

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HiJinx wrote:

KREECHER KREECHER TWW0u4j

General


Alias/Nicknames: Kreech, Kree
Race: Eldritch
Sub-species: Demon (Envy/Glutton)
Gender / Sexuality: Genderless / Pansexual
Age: Unknown but Ancient
Alignment: Rogue
Faction: Factionless

Persona


Personality: Kreech is odd, like literally if you look up the definition of the word "Odd" their image is probably found there, they are also chaotic evil at best and a monstrosity at worst. Their only goal in life is to hunt, eat, and collect voices and sounds to make the first two things easier. To say they are a jealous beast, would be putting them mildly, but would otherwise be correct. They're not noted for their general intelligence, though they are clever and will out wit most things they hunt fairly easily, socially they are about as smart as a brick of cement. Humor and sarcasm are lost on this creature, they simply do not understand it, what laughter they can manage is merely a learned mocking behavior. They do seem to be able to express some emotion but no one is certain if they actually feel them or if it is just a mockery they've learned over the span of their existence.

History: No one really knows where Kreecher began, not even Kreecher, it seems as though they were born from human hunger and jealousy, and that's what made them what they are now. Stories of Kreecher span across generations and landscapes, from mountain villages to the larger cities and all the cracks and crevices in between; it seems as though across time and across the world every race, every class, has heard tales of the monster. Kreech is an Eldritch, a Demon, spawned as far back as humanity has existed, and since spawning they have done nothing but cause terror and bloodshed in their wake.
Likes: Shiny Things, Lanterns, Collecting New Sounds/Voices.

Dislikes: Sunlight, Gun Fire, Water.

Goal/Aspiration: The destruction of humanity, or anything else that gets in their way.

Key Fear/Adversary: The sun, it is the one thing that will drive them off.

Appearance


Height: 10 ft
Body Type: Slim
Hair: None unless you count the tendrils of shadow like energy that whisp off him.
Eyes: Red and lots of them..
Skin Tone: They don't really have skin, they seem to be made of a thick semi viscous substance; shiny and black, held in a cage within whatever outer shell they are currently using.

Overall Appearance:
Kreecher:
KREECHER IpA2g7s

Interesting concept! I'm excited to see Kreecher in action, but first, before I can get this approved for you, there are a few things that need to be addressed.

Firstly, your personality only has 163 words of the required 200. Beef it up a little and we're good to go!

Secondly, there are a couple of Vyldermire lore issues with your history. Humans existed a while before the Eldritch race was born, so "spawned as far back as humanity has existed" is a bit impossible. A bigger issue, though, is the implication that Kreecher specifically is a legend, because it's kind of like unearned reputation. The way it's worded, other characters are automatically expected to know of them because it ‘says so’ in their history. Since Reputation is a system (earned from Quests) we have here on Vyldermire, new characters have to start as relatively unknown unless the player has an existing account with REP accrued to transfer to the new character to justify it.

Thirdly, that said, I have suggestions to remedy the issue, but you don't have to take them by any means. You could say that the stories of the demon you are describing aren't exactly of Kreecher specifically, but rather Kreecher is like those types of demons and aspires to be as well known as the ones in the scary stories. Or you could describe what the Human or Gaiyan was like that he spawned from and how they fell to their sin, even if Kreecher doesn't remember it. It's just 100 words, so you can be as vague as you like.

Lastly, if you need my ear, feel free to DM me on discord. Otherwise, once you've made your edits, just bump this thread and I'll hop back to check!

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Post by Guest Wed Jun 23, 2021 6:09 am

Ok I think I fixed it, let me know what you think.
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Post by Iris Wed Jun 23, 2021 6:21 am

❀:
HiJinx wrote:

KREECHER KREECHER TWW0u4j

General


Alias/Nicknames: Kreech, Kree
Race: Eldritch
Sub-species: Demon (Envy/Glutton)
Gender / Sexuality: Genderless / Pansexual
Age: Unknown but Ancient
Alignment: Rogue
Faction: Factionless

Persona


Personality: Kreech is odd, like literally if you look up the definition of the word "Odd" their image is probably found there, loving to learn and mimic new sounds and play with his food… They are also chaotic evil at best and a monstrosity at worst, finding delight only in causing fear and pain in the lives of mortals. Their main goal in life is to hunt, eat, and collect voices and sounds to make the first two things easier. Their secondary goal; become as powerful as the beasts of lore and relish in the terror of mankind wrought by their own hands, they don’t wish to be a secondary tale or a side thought, they want the full power their kind can master.  To say they are a jealous beast, would be putting them mildly, but would otherwise be correct; they will do anything to achieve their goals and reach the top of the pedestal of their kind. While usually have little desire to cooperate with others the demon can be… bargained with. Kreech loves all things shiny or considered precious, they can also be seen striking up contracts with those willing to give them new voices or sounds to mimic, those none of their contracts come with simple terms and they are known for being a fickle creature. They're not noted for their general intelligence, though they are clever and will out wit most things they hunt fairly easily, socially they are about as smart as a brick of cement. Humor and sarcasm are lost on this creature, they simply do not understand it, what laughter they can manage is merely a learned mocking behavior. They do seem to be able to express some emotion but no one is certain if they actually feel them or if it is just a mockery they've learned over the span of their existence, it is also possible that these few emotions are their last tidbit connection to the mortal life they once existed as.

History: No one really knows exactly where Kreecher began, not even Kreecher, and stories of Kreecher’s kind span across generations and landscapes, from mountain villages to the larger cities and all the cracks and crevices in between; it seems as though across time and across the world every race, every class, has heard tales of these monstrosities and they often used as fables and tales to keep naughty children in line. Kreech is an Eldritch, a Demon, spawned from the falling of a mortal man to his own sins and desires, since spawning they have forgotten who they once were and have done nothing but cause terror and bloodshed in their wake since.  Kreech themselves has taken to traveling, getting a taste for his newfound thrill in the hunt of mankind and the chaos spread by their own hand.

As a human, though Kreech no longer remembers this life time, he was a envious and gluttonous man, who fell prey to his desires and sold his soul to a demon to get what he wanted. When his contract went astray and unraveled around him ruining his chances to receive what he desired, the demon came to retrieve what was owed per the terms of the contract and the man killed him in a last ditch effort to try and retain his soul but it was to late, and thus Kreech was born from the desperation of the corrupt soul of a mortal man who killed a demon…

Likes: Shiny Things, Lanterns, Collecting New Sounds/Voices.

Dislikes: Sunlight, Gun Fire, Water.

Goal/Aspiration: The destruction of humanity, or anything else that gets in their way.

Key Fear/Adversary: The sun, it is the one thing that will drive them off.

Appearance


Height: 10 ft
Body Type: Slim
Hair: None unless you count the tendrils of shadow like energy that whisp off him.
Eyes: Red and lots of them..
Skin Tone: They don't really have skin, they seem to be made of a thick semi viscous substance; shiny and black, held in a cage within whatever outer shell they are currently using.

Overall Appearance:
Kreecher:
KREECHER IpA2g7s

KREECHER QRmoaKI

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