Magic App. Review Request

Daphne wrote:Username: Daphne
Magic Name: Dreamweaver
Magic Rank: Apprentice
Player Statsheet: x
Elemental Mastery: Yes, Dreams

Emi Kazama wrote:Username: Emi Kazama
Magic Name: Comedic Gold Humor
Magic Rank: Tier 1
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t528-emi-kazama-s-official-statsheet?nid=4#1888
Elemental Mastery: No

Bleuenn Bosser wrote:Username: Bleuenn Bosser
Magic Name: Breath Of The Moon
Magic Rank: Apprentice
Player Statsheet: Stats
Elemental Mastery: Yes (If yes please state which Element it is. The element stated must be one listed Ice.

Luchta Dagda wrote:Username: Luchta Dagda
Magic Name: Scion of Olde
Magic Rank: 1
-Player Statsheet-
Elemental Mastery: Yes, Earth

Nemarius the Watcher wrote:Username: Nemarius the Watcher
Magic Name: Angel of Vigilance
Magic Rank: First
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t665-nemarius-official-statsheet?nid=2#3093
Elemental Mastery:No

Luchta Dagda wrote:Username: Luchta Dagda
Magic Name: Scion of Olde (Same magic as before)
Magic Rank: Tier 2
Player Statsheet: Player Statsheet
Elemental Mastery: Yes, Earth (Same magic as before)

Wade Madrox wrote:Username: Wade Madrox
Magic Name: Grim Reaper Magic
Magic Rank: Novice
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t682-wade-madrox-s-official-statsheet
Elemental Mastery: No

Soot wrote:Username: Soot
Magic Name: Friendly Fire
Magic Rank: Novice
Player Statsheet: Soot's Stat Sheet
Elemental Mastery: Yes, Fire

Edwin wrote:Username: Edwin
Magic Name:Ancient Radiance
Magic Rank: Novice
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t699-edwin-briar-s-official-statsheet#3423
Elemental Mastery: Yes. Light Magic

Kiigan wrote:Username: Kiigan
Magic Name: Natural Devastation
Magic Rank: Novice
Player Statsheet: Boop
Elemental Mastery: No

Shane wrote:Username: Shane
Magic Name: Blaze Dragon
Magic Rank: First Tier
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t721-shane-s-official-statsheet
Elemental Mastery: Yes, Fire element

Shane wrote:Username: Shane
Magic Name: Blaze Dragon
Magic Rank: Novice
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t721-shane-s-official-statsheet#3566

I would like to request edits for below:

1. Magic edit
New magic name: Roaring Flames
New magic description: The Roaring Flames Magic allows the user to create, control and ultimately become fire itself. The user is able launch devastating fire-based attacks and is able to produce and control flames around various parts of their body to increase the force of physical attacks. At the peak of mastery, the user is able to transform their physical body into flames itself. However, users of the Roaring Flames magic are still able to transform their physical state into flames at lower levels of the magic for a very brief period. Shane also has absolute control over the size and temperature of the flames he control, allowing him to act with discretion.

2. "Blaze Breath" edits
New spell name: Blazefire Fist
New spell description: Shane rapidly gathers a huge amount of flames around his fist and launches it as his target as a powerful blast of flames from afar.

3. "Blaze Smash" edits
New spell name: Blazefire Smash

Shane wrote:Username: Shane
Magic Name: Roaring Flames
Magic Rank: Apprentice
Player Statsheet: https://www.vyldermire.com/t721-shane-s-official-statsheet
Elemental Mastery: Yes, fire